Очень прошу проверить грамматику в кратком рассказе о любимом книжном персонаже. Спасибо.
My favourite book characters is the Edmond Dantes. From the book The Count of Monte Cristo.
His appearance:
He was a heavy-built body, he had blond hair and a round face.
Features of character:
He has a very strong and persistent character.
Special about Edmond Dantes:
His desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies.