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This story happened to one of the beautiful summer days in Brazil. I was in the city the second day and did not really know him, but in the first day I had time to get acquainted with Holly.
Suddenly, the next morning called Holly, joyfully shouting into the phone, "Get ready, we go to the fabulous Carnival." After sunset I went into the city. All Brazil was plunged into the atmosphere of samba, flirting, glitter dresses, eye shines and smiles of millions of people, from the heart to betray the main holiday of the country. I could not find Holly in a stream of people was unreal, so stopped and all excitedly waiting for the start of the holiday. Cheerful music in the style of Sambo deafening the entire city. The first thing I saw figures moving giant carnival is a real fairytale world created by the talent and imagination of designers and hundreds of thousands of Brazilians. Preparations for the carnival lasts several months. It creates fire-breathing dragons, the enigmatic Sphinx, pirate ships and underwater kingdom, moving among the giant carnival figures, you can see elephants and Neanderthals, Roman legionaries and the characters of fairy tales of the peoples of the world. Suddenly I saw Holly was standing on a platform of white fire-breathing dragon. Surprisingly, she saw me and ran to the edge of the platform shouted, "Maili, quickly climbs the Sambadrome on Sapucaí" I ran over and Holly helped climb.
Heart jumped out of crudités with delight that evening. we both laughed, danced, being inside a fairy tale.